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July 3, 2004

painting at bat

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 7:31 pm


at bat neg

 

moths circle

the stadium lights

seventh inning stretch

 



all day rain

on the playing field

a stray dog

 

 


 

by Tom Painting , from A New Resonance 2: Emerging Voices in English-Language Haiku . . at bat flip neg

(edited by Jim Kacian and Dee Evetts, Red Moon Press, 2001)  

 

 










children’s voices rise

one neighbor frowns

one smiles                          [07-03-04]

 

one-breath undit  
















 

painting at bat

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 7:31 pm


at bat neg

 

moths circle

the stadium lights

seventh inning stretch

 



all day rain

on the playing field

a stray dog

 

 


 

by Tom Painting , from A New Resonance 2: Emerging Voices in English-Language Haiku . . at bat flip neg

(edited by Jim Kacian and Dee Evetts, Red Moon Press, 2001)  

 

 










children’s voices rise

one neighbor frowns

one smiles                          [07-03-04]

 

one-breath undit  
















 

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