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July 25, 2004

where there’s smoke (thinking of So. Cal. friends)

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 2:23 pm


Moon slipping out of clouds–

the scent of smoke

from mountain forest fires

 

 

 

bat moon

 

 


Windblown curtain–

from a fold, a white moth

flutters out into moonlight

 



in English-Language Haiku  (Jim Kacian, Dee Evetts, eds., Red Moon Press, 2001)

credits: both haiku originally in Modern Haiku XXX:3

 








in bed 

alone

with a nagging back

                                   [7-25-04]


 


one-breath pundit  






 

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