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July 5, 2005

how did paul m. spend the Fourth?

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 2:48 pm

remaining heat
the frayed edge
of a salesman’s tie






dwindling light
my childhood home
a parking lot








long shadows
many places
to cross the creek





the car packed
one last pebble
cast into the sea



paul m from The Heron’s Nest – a haikai journal

remaining heat”  Sept. 2004; “the car packed” Sept. 2003

dwindling light”  May 2003; “long shadows”   Dec. 2003


parked on the shoulder

in a driving rain —

our flashers dim


[July 5, 2005]

p.s. Hello, Ana!  Don’t forget this driving pointer for Will.


                                                                                                                                                                           fill gas

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