more summer rain
an origami stork appears
on her fingertips
blackberry pie
steaming on the window sill
blue morning moon
first kiss
deep in the woods
sunbeams filter down
… by Randy Brooks from School’s Out (Press Here, 1999)
- by dagosan
lemon-ice stand —
the lawyer-dad looks for
a Brain Freeze Warning
[Aug. 13, 2005]
August 13, 2005
first kisses and brain freezes
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dave,
am at work. late in the shift and our
patients have been angels. randy’s
“blue moon” piece reminded me of one of my
own that was roundly praised on tiny words
a year and a half ago. thought you might like to use it in the future…
morning moon
the nooks and crannies
of an english muffin
also, this new haiku…
bikinis…
my eyes stinging
from saltwater
hope your weekend is going well. let me know how your doing.
ed
Comment by ed markowski — August 13, 2005 @ 11:39 pm
by the way, your “new paperback” piece is
definitely publishable.
ed
sams used boohs / i decide to get / an eye exam
Comment by ed markowski — August 13, 2005 @ 11:45 pm
dave,
hey, that italian ice sounds great considering i just finished a four
pepper thai noodle dish. am at work again. was looking through an old notebook today,
and found this piece that i had written
3 years ago after my buddy’s divorce
was final. thought you might find it
useful.
ed
clear and cold / the snap / of her attorney’s
briefcase
Comment by ed markowski — August 14, 2005 @ 7:52 pm
Great play of words. I originally thought this was a post on origami, but is is actually a nicely writtin poem using the expression of an origami crane. If you ever want to know how to make an origami crane you can check out this blog for simple and easy directions. http://www.howtodorigamiblog.com
Comment by Lorenzo — August 30, 2008 @ 6:04 am