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October 13, 2005

around the haikusphere

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 7:44 pm

today

 

– at Tiny Words:

 




nude beach
  a man and a woman
    collect shells

 

       ed markowski 

            originally in The Heron’s Nest.

 

 

 

 

 

– at Morden Haiku:

 

 



budget cut meeting

the sound of a strimmer 

revving up

 


 

 

 

 

tiny check added to the f/k/a pumpkin collection:

 

 




 

a frown
of concentration
pumpkin carving










pumpkin neg 

 

carved
into a green pumpkin
queasy face


 


“a frown” – Modern Haiku, XXX:2, 1999

“carved” – South by Southeast, 7:3, 2001


 

 

tiny check  eked out by dagosan:

 

 




half a tank —

Old Glory in tatters

above the gas pump

 

         dagosan 

              (hat tip to elizabeth macfarland)

 

                                                                                                                     gas pump g

 

6 Comments

  1. david,
    in response to “eked out by dagosan,”
    the best poem on the page.
    ed

    Comment by ed markowski — October 13, 2005 @ 9:31 pm

  2. david,
    in response to “eked out by dagosan,”
    the best poem on the page.
    ed

    Comment by ed markowski — October 13, 2005 @ 9:31 pm

  3. Ed,  You’re making me blush.  I don’t even have to fish for compliments (like I did on Columbus Day).  thanks for all your encouragement.

    Comment by David Giacalone — October 13, 2005 @ 10:14 pm

  4. Ed,  You’re making me blush.  I don’t even have to fish for compliments (like I did on Columbus Day).  thanks for all your encouragement.

    Comment by David Giacalone — October 13, 2005 @ 10:14 pm

  5. david,
    you’re welcome.
    ed / winter wind / the hygenist offers / nitrous or novocaine

    Comment by ed markowski — October 13, 2005 @ 11:48 pm

  6. david,
    you’re welcome.
    ed / winter wind / the hygenist offers / nitrous or novocaine

    Comment by ed markowski — October 13, 2005 @ 11:48 pm

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