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October 21, 2005

pumping old brakes

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 5:51 pm

. . . and, posting old Brooks (and loving it):


 








first kiss

deep in the woods . .

sunbeams filter down

 


 


load of seedwheat–

pumping old brakes

all the way down the hill

 

 

 

 

 





day of atonement . . .
the weight of crabapples
bent to the ground

 

 

 

 

 


 








autumn rain . . .
the last of the dust
brought to earth

 



autumn rain . . .” – Tasting Vintage Haiku (World Haiku Review)  

day of atonement” – Modern Haiku (Spring 2004)

“load of seedwheat” & “first kiss” – from School’s Out (1999) 



 





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first cold morning —

river mist mixes

with car exhaust

 

 




 

first cold day

torn index finger

on last year’s glove

 

[Oct. 21, 2005]

 

 

“HurricaneG”   breathless punditry


tiny check Hurricane Wilma, go away.

 

tiny check  It’s 4:55 PM on a Friday — who cares what’s happening

in the Miers confirmation?  Right now, not I.  Have a

great weekend.  That means you, too, Prof. B.

 

tiny check  Out of breath.  Naptime.

 

                                                                                                             “napperGraySmN”

2 Comments

  1. Today We have cold rain , but it is still autumn here in Tokyo.
    Changing season will bring us chance for making haiku.
    thank you for sharing nice haiku.

    sakuo.

    Comment by sakuo3903 — October 22, 2005 @ 10:30 am

  2. Today We have cold rain , but it is still autumn here in Tokyo.
    Changing season will bring us chance for making haiku.
    thank you for sharing nice haiku.

    sakuo.

    Comment by sakuo3903 — October 22, 2005 @ 10:30 am

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