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October 8, 2008

foggy, chilly, out of focus

Filed under: Haiku or Senryu,Schenectady Synecdoche — David Giacalone @ 9:58 am

.. . . . no, not last night’s soporific Presidential Debate (nor our simultaneous finger-puppet townhall meeting).

cloud and fog–
into my sleeves
they go

in the river fog
a boisterous noise…
tea-picking song

… by Kobayashi Issa, translated by David G. Lanoue

— photos by David Giacalone, Riverside Park, Schenectady NY, Oct. 8, 2008 —

We’re talking about the far more inspiring Mohawk River, as seen around 8:30 this morning at Riverside Park, along Schenectady’s Stockade neighborhood.  While waiting for a load of laundry to dry, the f/k/a Gang headed out and snapped a few photos, which we’re sharing with our readers (click on each for larger versions), along with fog haiku and senryu from our Honored Guest Poets.  Enjoy.

in and out of fog
driving him
to the home

… by w.f. owen – Haiku Notebook (Lulu Press, 2007)

morning fog. . .
a mash of wild apples
on the road

……… by tom clausen from being there (Swamp Press, 2005)

pea soup fog
the sound of a map
unfolding beside me

winter fog
everyone crowds around
the mime

… by Ed Markowski –  Haiku Sun (Issue X, Jan. 2004)

through a hole
in the fog     billboard girl’s
radiant face

… by George Swede – Almost Unseen (Brooks Books, 2000)

fog all day
the whiteness
in my ears

… by Alice Frampton –  Frogpond XXIV:2

fog on the bridge
this small truck
for all our belongings

soft leather
on an old baseball
spring fog

…. by paul m.
“fog on the bridge” – from called home (Red Moon Press, 2006)
“soft leather” –  A New Resonance 2: ; Frogpond XXII:2

waiting for you
another pair of headlights
through the fog

.. by Yu Chang from Upstate Dim Sum (2003/I)

morning fog
a midwife wipes the eyes
of a newborn

… by Andrew Riutta – Tinywords.com (Aug. 23, 2007)

….

Thick fog lifts –
unfortunately, I am where
I thought I was

… by George Swede –  Simply Haiku Winter 2006 (vol 4 no 4)

1 Comment

  1. Makes me want to pack up the kids and visit “Uncle Davie” in Schenectady before the sun comes out. Thanks for sharing the images and poetry.

    Comment by Arthur J. Giacalone — October 12, 2008 @ 6:26 pm

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