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June 23, 2004

after a long day

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 4:59 pm







 

just dusk

the hush yields

    to crickets

 

 

 

   the lake laps

all night the same

   quiet thoughts

 

 


by Jim Kacian , from Presents of Mind “presents kacian”

(Katsura/Red Moon Press, 1996)





comparing aches 

before the show —

senior organ recital

                               [dag, 06-23-04, thanks r.n.]  

after a long day

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 4:59 pm







 

just dusk

the hush yields

    to crickets

 

 

 

   the lake laps

all night the same

   quiet thoughts

 

 


by Jim Kacian , from Presents of Mind “presents kacian”

(Katsura/Red Moon Press, 1996)





comparing aches 

before the show —

senior organ recital

                               [dag, 06-23-04, thanks r.n.]  

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